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Postby datherman » Mon Feb 09, 2009 7:01 pm

I'm assuming Javs.
Always knew there was something fishy about you dude :wag:
That was horrible.

And I LOL'd.
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Postby Segovia » Mon Feb 09, 2009 11:58 pm

Now I'm trying to make more fluent motions and more complex postions so here's this attempt.

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It's not a doodle because I spent a good 20 minutes just trying to get Reggie's postion right.
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Postby Mekkah » Tue Feb 10, 2009 12:29 am

I see that you're using body frames for the bodies.

If you're going to draw furniture, use frames for those too. It'll help you get that 3D feeling for them.
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Postby FerretParade » Tue Feb 10, 2009 1:50 am

The one guy is HUGE compared to the other.
so there's a high school football coach sittin on the couch,
with a toothpick in his mouth.
and the stray dog won't forget the day,
he tricked him with a chocolate shake. (little trick)
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Postby Segovia » Tue Feb 10, 2009 1:51 am

That's was one of the problems I was having when I was drawing it, but I couldn't really get it to improve.
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Postby Dr. Sticks » Tue Feb 10, 2009 2:32 am

well, you're practicing on using skeletal frames so I guess the next thing to work on would be perspective, like vanishing points and stuff. It would help you keep people realistically sized even if one of them is closer to the "camera" than the other
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Postby Tarukai » Tue Feb 10, 2009 3:08 pm

Perspective can be a bitch when trying to draw stuff.

Also, on the Jaws (Javs?) theme, it's not that hard to spot and play a minor second interval :P
[00:34:00] <Dermy> I do love to manipulate the standard rules of language for opportunistic effect
[00:34:06] <Dermy> Like a grammar hyena, I am
[00:34:16] <Dermy> Munching on the tasty entrails of tradition

[22:26:20] <MuffinSticks> I'm a chocolate muffin with white ears and a striped black and red tail
[22:26:35] <MuffinSticks> And exactly 6 chips

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Postby Rooster » Tue Feb 10, 2009 7:13 pm

I'm assuming Javs.
Always knew there was something fishy about you dude :wag:
That was horrible.

And I LOL'd.
*takes bow*

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Postby Angstwolf » Tue Feb 10, 2009 9:07 pm

You clever man.
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Postby Segovia » Tue Feb 10, 2009 10:33 pm

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Awww.. How cute.
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Postby Dr. Sticks » Tue Feb 10, 2009 10:43 pm

:wag: the wrist could be a little more defined on the right hand, but that's pretty good
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Postby Segovia » Tue Feb 10, 2009 10:48 pm

Thanks I also tried making my characters look more furrier by adding those like spikes on the joints of the arms and the tail so I hope that improves the image in some way.
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Postby datherman » Tue Feb 10, 2009 10:59 pm

Actually not bad. The fingers could use some work (some curvature for instance) but it's getting better.
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Postby FerretParade » Wed Feb 11, 2009 4:49 am

Looks like you are learning something from me finally
so there's a high school football coach sittin on the couch,
with a toothpick in his mouth.
and the stray dog won't forget the day,
he tricked him with a chocolate shake. (little trick)
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Postby Mekkah » Wed Feb 11, 2009 8:07 am

Learn to clean up your ink lines (if you did ink that).

Practice anatomy a bit (even cartoons need a little anatomy added in).

Hands n' feet are difficult to get down, but I would recommend focusing on those too.
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