It was a mistake.
However we keep this one,
and we post haiku.
Debate slamming (Haikus, lots of 'em)
Moderator:Æron
The haiku rules protest,
Their tree grown in foreign roots
The sound count pointless
Other rules rule the haiku,
When its leaves are counted, they fall,
Meter and meaning left behind
Mu-Lan resembles Ozy
The fox grows more furry in winter
Monks shave all the time?
The lamps burn brightly
False summer in tiny study,
From heat or haiku, tired
Their tree grown in foreign roots
The sound count pointless
Other rules rule the haiku,
When its leaves are counted, they fall,
Meter and meaning left behind
Mu-Lan resembles Ozy
The fox grows more furry in winter
Monks shave all the time?
The lamps burn brightly
False summer in tiny study,
From heat or haiku, tired
Can't get broadband here,< 1MBMister The MAZZTer,
your avatars are so huge.
Takes long time to load.
All my avatars are so
Get broadband, it's cheap
I live out in the boonies.
I want it so bad.
Quoth the spotted fox: <b>*yerf*</b> 
You usually
have to take what people say
with a grain of salt.
(or in cases like
mine, a shaker or two may
yield the best result.)
むらがあるフォックス
If you miss my old sigs...
You usually
have to take what people say
with a grain of salt.
(or in cases like
mine, a shaker or two may
yield the best result.)
むらがあるフォックス
If you miss my old sigs...
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Holley, did you know
That each line of your haiku
Is a bit too short?
That each line of your haiku
Is a bit too short?
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More Haikus from the spotted fox!
Well, the last line was
right amount of syllables.
Guess it kinda works.
KJ Fellie's short
for Keijai Ki Tallanahn
Felligenisis
Just in case you were
wondering about my name,
ancestral namesake...
Here's a link to an
explanation of my name
in another thread.
Haiku slam is fun.
Nursing bruises, though. I've been
Haiku-ing at work.
right amount of syllables.
Guess it kinda works.
Holley counts on fingers
But after the nasty accident
It don't work so well
Holley counts fingers
After nasty accident
It don't work so well
KJ Fellie's short
for Keijai Ki Tallanahn
Felligenisis
Just in case you were
wondering about my name,
ancestral namesake...
Here's a link to an
explanation of my name
in another thread.
Haiku slam is fun.
Nursing bruises, though. I've been
Haiku-ing at work.
Quoth the spotted fox: <b>*yerf*</b>
You usually
have to take what people say
with a grain of salt.
(or in cases like
mine, a shaker or two may
yield the best result.)
むらがあるフォックス
If you miss my old sigs...
You usually
have to take what people say
with a grain of salt.
(or in cases like
mine, a shaker or two may
yield the best result.)
むらがあるフォックス
If you miss my old sigs...
Haiku need Kigo
Or else toy with fallacy
Like sharp autumn wind.
Necessary
Seasonal reference
Puts you all on ice.
~~~
And so in closing
I show to you this form change
As is simply put:
I end this not with Haiku,
I slam you with Tanka here.
The weighted companion cube,
But it had to die.
Or else toy with fallacy
Like sharp autumn wind.
Necessary
Seasonal reference
Puts you all on ice.
~~~
And so in closing
I show to you this form change
As is simply put:
I end this not with Haiku,
I slam you with Tanka here.
I forever love"This was a triumph.
I am making a note here:
HUGE SUCCESS." -- GLaDOS
The weighted companion cube,
But it had to die.
If you are under the age of 18, you are advised not to interact with me.
Huh. Seems like a little bit OCD.It's a three-line poem in which the first and third lines consist of 5 syllables and the second line consists of 7 syllables. There may be more to it that I don't know (or frankly, care about), but that's the gist of a haiku.*holds up paw*
What the hell is a Haiku?
Could be, could be. It IS Japanese, after all.Huh. Seems like a little bit OCD.It's a three-line poem in which the first and third lines consist of 5 syllables and the second line consists of 7 syllables. There may be more to it that I don't know (or frankly, care about), but that's the gist of a haiku.*holds up paw*
What the hell is a Haiku?
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