TEEN O&M first strip release... plz comment

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TEEN O&M first strip release... plz comment

Postby santi » Sun Nov 12, 2006 9:50 pm

done. after working all week, i finished a few strips... i hope you like it, anyway i dont have much expectations since this is kinda a pilot, to see how well could i do... anyway, here you are

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leave comments, plz
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Postby Angstwolf » Sun Nov 12, 2006 10:05 pm

I think it's pretty awesome. My only complaint is that it's hard to follow sometimes because of the placement of the panels and speech bubbles.

Your art is great especially.

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Postby santi » Sun Nov 12, 2006 10:10 pm

thanks! i'll try to fix that problem :wink:

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Postby CodeCat » Sun Nov 12, 2006 10:36 pm

Niiiiiiice! :wag:

I can't wait for more!
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Postby santi » Sun Nov 12, 2006 10:38 pm

i hope i will get done a set of strips each sunday

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Postby VenM2 » Sun Nov 12, 2006 11:03 pm

Umm, it must just be my head but it tells me that the characters look quite awkward and feels a bit uncomfortable however I dismiss that as being your drawing style. Meaning it feels wierd but I like it :wag: .

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Postby santi » Sun Nov 12, 2006 11:04 pm

Umm, it must just be my head but it tells me that the characters look quite awkward and feels a bit uncomfortable however I dismiss that as being your drawing style. Meaning it feels wierd but I like it :wag: .
meaning I don't quite know how to draw the character yet :laugh:

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Postby Foxhound » Sun Nov 12, 2006 11:21 pm

It wouldn't load. :sad:
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Postby Rooster » Sun Nov 12, 2006 11:27 pm

Deffinatly awesome dude. You should read the comments on DA for my two pence.

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Postby santi » Sun Nov 12, 2006 11:28 pm

It wouldn't load. :sad:
yo have to click on download. it wont show up otherwise, since its a .zip file

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Postby gen200 » Sun Nov 12, 2006 11:31 pm

I really, really like it.

The art has this sort of dark, Jack-like feel that kinda works with it more than I thought it would.

My only complaint is, I had to read through it twice to figure out why Ozy hit Avery :?
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Postby santi » Sun Nov 12, 2006 11:33 pm

jaja sorry about that. I'll try to make things clear next time ^^

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Postby Holyman83 » Mon Nov 13, 2006 2:04 am

I like you look like you did a good job with it. Thou I am dieing to know what Avery did to make Ozy of all people mad.
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Postby Angstwolf » Mon Nov 13, 2006 2:42 am

I like you look like you did a good job with it. Thou I am dieing to know what Avery did to make Ozy of all people mad.
I think it was because Avery pwned Ozy by flushing the toilet while Ozy was in the shower, causing the temperature of the water to change a large amount in a small window of time.

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Postby Richard K Niner » Mon Nov 13, 2006 2:44 am

I like you look like you did a good job with it. Thou I am dieing to know what Avery did to make Ozy of all people mad.
I think it was because Avery pwned Ozy by flushing the toilet while Ozy was in the shower, causing the temperature of the water to change a large amount in a small window of time.
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