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Postby VenM2 » Sun Mar 25, 2007 7:26 pm

PR... smiled? :shock: :grin:
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Postby Angstwolf » Sun Mar 25, 2007 8:10 pm

PR... smiled? :shock: :grin:
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Postby Richard K Niner » Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:45 pm

PR... smiled? :shock: :grin:
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What does Roo have to do with this?
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Postby Arloest » Mon Mar 26, 2007 1:59 am

PR... smiled? :shock: :grin:
Yeah, whatupwidat?
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Postby Bocaj Claw » Mon Mar 26, 2007 5:26 am

I used to be a sentient broom doomed to forever talk backwards but thanks to Roo in a can, I'm now what can be loosely called an artist who pretends to be a cat online. THANKS ROO IN A CAN! :shock:
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Postby FerretParade » Mon Mar 26, 2007 12:52 pm

Since you seem to be looking for critique all I'm gonna say is keep practicing man hehe.

The light source doesn't make much sense to me. The pants are actually the opposite of what it should be for lighting.

The pencil was shaded like its a flat object and the top is drawn like its bent like a golf club. You gotta realize each surface is going to have different lightnesses and darknesses Careful with your highlighting. Your use of it has turned his shirt into what looks like a black rain coat or garbage bag.

Where you have the tail sticking from is at a point where its hard for most people to make an imaginary line with their eyes I think you should have lead viewers a little better

The head and the bag you've probably already heard about a lot so I'm not gonna touch that.

Nice attempt for a first but there so much you can do and art is a never ending battle towards improvement. Fight the good fight.
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Postby Muninn » Mon Mar 26, 2007 3:31 pm

Is he... falling? Or are those not speed lines around his head and arms?
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Postby santi » Mon Mar 26, 2007 7:55 pm

thanks to FF for the critique! all of those issues have come out several times, so im keeping all what people have told me in mind to make something better next time. and no, hes not falling. I just wanted to blur it a bit. why? because :P
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Postby nickspoon » Mon Mar 26, 2007 8:08 pm

That, my friend, is thoroughly awesome. Thoroughly.
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