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Postby PAK » Tue Jan 30, 2007 3:44 pm

I like this Sarah. The only trouble is that she looks the same age as her son. I'm not sure how best to convey middle age.
yea i thought of that too...i had enough trouble conveying that she's female...(hence the eyelashes)...

i mean, in ozy&millie its easy to convey adults, cause they are taller than the kids. but for teenagers, that difference kinda fades away. i mean, im 16, and im taller than my mom... :wink:
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Postby Comrade K » Tue Jan 30, 2007 6:02 pm

Well, I think it would help make Sarah look more feminine if you made her waist a bit thinner and her shoulders and hips a little wider, also, to make her look older, make her head a bit smaller as compared to her body, just change the proportions so that her head doesn't look as big, because big heads imply youth.

A couple of other things that might help, if you want an adult male, give him whiskers or at least little points to indicate whiskers, as that could replace facial hair as an indicater of gender and age. And you might want to try making your male characters shoulders a bit broader, to make it easier to distinguish between males and females, as you currently draw their bodies the same.

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Postby CodeCat » Tue Jan 30, 2007 7:53 pm

She reminds me of Shelley...
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Postby Chris » Tue Jan 30, 2007 8:29 pm

She reminds me of Shelley...
What He said ^^

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Postby VenM2 » Tue Jan 30, 2007 8:35 pm

Indeed. *Teal'c Style*q
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Postby PAK » Tue Jan 30, 2007 8:37 pm

Indeed. *Teal'c Style*
er...what?

and who's shelley?? :shock:
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Postby Comrade K » Tue Jan 30, 2007 8:38 pm

Indeed. *Teal'c Style*
er...what?

and who's shelley?? :shock:
I was wondering the same thing.U
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Postby PAK » Tue Jan 30, 2007 8:57 pm

Ozy's missing mom who was ascended to another dimension by ice cream. Globviously. ;)
/me smacks myself for forgetting

of course!

i stil dont get what venm2 said tho...
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Postby Comrade K » Tue Jan 30, 2007 9:12 pm

Oh yeah...
Shelley. Heh.
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Postby VenM2 » Tue Jan 30, 2007 11:26 pm

Ozy's missing mom who was ascended to another dimension by ice cream. Globviously. ;)
/me smacks myself for forgetting

of course!

i stil dont get what venm2 said tho...
I already told you. I wonder where DC got the idea of ascension from...
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Postby Rooster » Wed Jan 31, 2007 3:02 am

Well, Daniel Jackson's done it what...three times now? Or does becoming infused with Merlin and becoming a Pariah count?

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Postby VenM2 » Wed Jan 31, 2007 5:46 am

Well, Daniel Jackson's done it what...three times now? Or does becoming infused with Merlin and becoming a Pariah count?

Oh mercy me.
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Postby PAK » Wed Jan 31, 2007 8:58 pm

new comic :D

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ok, the reason that there's a lot of text and not a lot of max/zach is cause i wanted to try drawing other stuff, and i just had a physics lesson earlier :P so forgive the scientificness :P
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Postby Priest_Revan » Wed Jan 31, 2007 9:00 pm

Yay! Eyebrows!
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