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Auto Response from Omg itz me ftw (8:54:16 PM): DoogOMGLOL
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Well put doog. You never posted anything offensive whatsoever
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Paper #1, Revision Paragraph
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4 February 2009
The Sounds of Innovation
I did not actually change anything between my rough draft and my final draft. My peer editor made two suggestions for changing words, both of which I rejected (one because it would change the meaning of the sentence too much, and the other because it would cause unnecessary word repetition). Other than those word suggestions, my peer editor seemed to be happy with the structure and organization of the paper. She did say that the conclusion may be a little bit too open-ended, but I am satisfied with the conclusion. I think that even though there is a question posed in the final paragraph, it serves to make a point about the uncertainty of the future relationship between technology and music.
Paper #1, Revision Paragraph
3300:112:053
4 February 2009
The Sounds of Innovation
I did not actually change anything between my rough draft and my final draft. My peer editor made two suggestions for changing words, both of which I rejected (one because it would change the meaning of the sentence too much, and the other because it would cause unnecessary word repetition). Other than those word suggestions, my peer editor seemed to be happy with the structure and organization of the paper. She did say that the conclusion may be a little bit too open-ended, but I am satisfied with the conclusion. I think that even though there is a question posed in the final paragraph, it serves to make a point about the uncertainty of the future relationship between technology and music.
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Well put doog. You never posted anything offensive whatsoever
we know she'll be back, like a good bitch should.
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