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<!--QuoteBegin-Supersmoke+Sep 14 2005, 10:54 PM--> <table border='0' align='center' width='95%' ><tr><td class='quotetop'><b>Quote:</b> (Supersmoke @ Sep 14 2005, 10:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td class='quotebody'> Mind if I give some crits? I'm into art and I think the only way to get better is to recieve critiques from other people.<br><br>VERY nice drawing. Your style is definitely apparent in your work.<br>But there are some things that bothered me in a quick glance at it.<br><br>1. ((((This one is just my preference)))) I understand that you're raising you're eyebrow, but the way your hair comes down over your other eye seems to make the eyes look awkward. It's looks ok, but if you were to better define the other eyebrow, it would make a better impression of your mood to the audience.<br><br>2. The left leg. Does it naturally bend like that? The left leg looks broken near the heel. Is that intentional due to the anatomy of an actual fox's hind leg? If so, you might want to make that more apparent in the right leg, because the way you drew the right leg is more straight/human-like.<br><br>3. The left leg again. As I look at the knee and the foot, they don't line up. The knee faces me, but the foot faces at least 30 degrees to the right of the knee's direction. The right leg is lined up nicely, but not the left leg. Doing that with one's leg is very hard to do unintentionally.<br><br><br><br><br>Hope my advice helps you. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://definecynical.mancubus.net/forum ... /smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table> <!--QuoteEEnd--><br><br><br>I just got your jist.
I wonder if it'll finally get it's own forum too. I've always wanted a place online where I can talk about O&M.
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<!--QuoteBegin-FoxChild+Sep 16 2005, 04:10 PM--> <table border='0' align='center' width='95%' ><tr><td class='quotetop'><b>Quote:</b> (FoxChild @ Sep 16 2005, 04:10 PM)</td></tr><tr><td class='quotebody'> I'm not on DA either, and constructive critisism is always a welcome thing. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table> <!--QuoteEEnd--><br> You should join mate, your art is pretty sweet <!--emo&:wag:--><img src='http://definecynical.mancubus.net/forum ... ailwag.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tailwag.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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<!--QuoteBegin-FoxChild+Sep 17 2005, 02:10 AM--> <table border='0' align='center' width='95%' ><tr><td class='quotetop'><b>Quote:</b> (FoxChild @ Sep 17 2005, 02:10 AM)</td></tr><tr><td class='quotebody'> I'm not on DA either... <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table> <!--QuoteEEnd--><br> It'd be pretty cool if you posted all your art that you've done in the past up to now.<br>Bring back memories.
Very awesome stuff, FoxChild! <!--emo&:wag:--><img src='http://definecynical.mancubus.net/forum ... ailwag.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tailwag.gif' /><!--endemo--> The coloring, the details in musculature, and of course the liveliness you put in the eyes. Very good.
<!--QuoteBegin-FoxChild+Sep 16 2005, 10:10 AM--> <table border='0' align='center' width='95%' ><tr><td class='quotetop'><b>Quote:</b> (FoxChild @ Sep 16 2005, 10:10 AM)</td></tr><tr><td class='quotebody'> I'm not on DA either... <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table> <!--QuoteEEnd--><br> I am. <!--emo&:wag:--><img src='http://definecynical.mancubus.net/forum ... ailwag.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tailwag.gif' /><!--endemo--> <br><a href='http://amaroq-wolf.deviantart.com' target='_blank'>Amaroq-Wolf's DA</a><br><br>Come look at my two pieces of crappy art, and my fictional theory on how magic works.
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