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Alright, I bite....

Postby Alestance » Thu Jul 31, 2008 8:12 pm

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Postby Baconsticks » Thu Jul 31, 2008 8:27 pm

Nothing's really wrong. Unless you count the pixelation.
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Postby Sage » Thu Jul 31, 2008 9:33 pm

the white shine thing on his hat goes vertically, not diagonal. The blue band on his hat could be a little smaller... it all looks good though =p

and yes, it looks like you zoomed in quite a bit then took a picture using Print Screen? =O
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Postby datherman » Thu Jul 31, 2008 11:47 pm

The slope of his belly is a bit too straight, otherwise it looks very nice.
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Postby Ibun » Fri Aug 01, 2008 12:35 am

You drew Ozy.
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Postby Alestance » Fri Aug 01, 2008 12:39 am

I can't actually do a thing about the pixelation. Thats the program's fault. The image itself is at 1:1, or maybe not.

All of the things mentioned, besides the fact that I drew him, can be easily fixed though, and I'll follow up later.

I have a bit of a problem with the tail, though, it doesn't look right to me.

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Postby datherman » Fri Aug 01, 2008 1:26 am

I have a bit of a problem with the tail, though, it doesn't look right to me.
Looks to be a bit too narrow at the base, at least when compared to this forum's logo.
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Postby Fritz » Fri Aug 01, 2008 2:27 am

You drew Ozy.

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Postby Baconsticks » Fri Aug 01, 2008 2:30 am

You drew Ozy.
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Postby Tarukai » Fri Aug 01, 2008 3:23 am

This is well done, and the tail is a bit flat at the expanding area, but that's the only thing I noticed.
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Postby Arloest » Fri Aug 01, 2008 4:00 am

I really like this style, I must say.
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Postby Alestance » Fri Aug 01, 2008 4:34 am

Some minor tweaks and NOW its at 1:1.

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Postby Ibun » Fri Aug 01, 2008 4:43 am

I really like this style, I must say.
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Postby Alestance » Fri Aug 01, 2008 4:55 am

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Postby GeorgiaCoyote » Fri Aug 01, 2008 12:26 pm

Not bad. Then again I'm not much of a critic when it comes to artwork as I've said multiple times, ya'll do better than I ever could.
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