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TEEN O&M first strip release... plz comment
Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 9:50 pm
by santi
done. after working all week, i finished a few strips... i hope you like it, anyway i dont have much expectations since this is kinda a pilot, to see how well could i do... anyway, here you are
LINK
leave comments, plz
Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 10:05 pm
by Angstwolf
I think it's pretty awesome. My only complaint is that it's hard to follow sometimes because of the placement of the panels and speech bubbles.
Your art is great especially.
Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 10:10 pm
by santi
thanks! i'll try to fix that problem
Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 10:36 pm
by CodeCat
Niiiiiiice!
I can't wait for more!
Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 10:38 pm
by santi
i hope i will get done a set of strips each sunday
Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 11:03 pm
by VenM2
Umm, it must just be my head but it tells me that the characters look quite awkward and feels a bit uncomfortable however I dismiss that as being your drawing style. Meaning it feels wierd but I like it
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 11:04 pm
by santi
Umm, it must just be my head but it tells me that the characters look quite awkward and feels a bit uncomfortable however I dismiss that as being your drawing style. Meaning it feels wierd but I like it
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meaning I don't quite know how to draw the character yet
Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 11:21 pm
by Foxhound
It wouldn't load.
Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 11:27 pm
by Rooster
Deffinatly awesome dude. You should read the comments on DA for my two pence.
Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 11:28 pm
by santi
It wouldn't load.
yo have to click on download. it wont show up otherwise, since its a .zip file
Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 11:31 pm
by gen200
I really, really like it.
The art has this sort of dark, Jack-like feel that kinda works with it more than I thought it would.
My only complaint is, I had to read through it twice to figure out why Ozy hit Avery
Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 11:33 pm
by santi
jaja sorry about that. I'll try to make things clear next time ^^
Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 2:04 am
by Holyman83
I like you look like you did a good job with it. Thou I am dieing to know what Avery did to make Ozy of all people mad.
Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 2:42 am
by Angstwolf
I like you look like you did a good job with it. Thou I am dieing to know what Avery did to make Ozy of all people mad.
I think it was because Avery pwned Ozy by flushing the toilet while Ozy was in the shower, causing the temperature of the water to change a large amount in a small window of time.
Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 2:44 am
by Richard K Niner
I like you look like you did a good job with it. Thou I am dieing to know what Avery did to make Ozy of all people mad.
I think it was because Avery pwned Ozy by flushing the toilet while Ozy was in the shower, causing the temperature of the water to change a large amount in a small window of time.
Wusses. The temperature really doesn't change that much
