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A Guest Comic
Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 9:21 pm
by Niko123000
But Not for Ozy and Mille. It's for a Diffrent Comic known as Fletcher Apts. I'm just posting what I have so far... and BTW, I am apologizing fully for what will be the final one...
Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 10:54 pm
by Niko123000
Ok... Anyone Else think the Fourth Panel just looks a Little... weird? and If you can spot what makes it look weird, please tell me!
Now, I've had plenty a Problem with Inking in the Past. If someone would tell me a nice, easy way to ink, I would be very apreciative.
Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 11:08 pm
by Chris
Nice
Would be cool tho if you laid your Strip just like O&M ones (the horizontal ones) and as for inking i dont know...i just ink my strip using an ordinary BallPoint pen.
Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 11:09 pm
by Dr. Doog
the weird part is the protruding arm. Is that the foreground arm or the background arm? It looks like it's um...you know... not in the shoulder-socket. O_o
Obviously he's not going to make his strip a one-row strip if the actual webcomic uses the two-row format. I like it, Niko! ^_^
Posted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 2:28 am
by Holyman83
Looks good!
Posted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 2:58 am
by Niko123000
My New hurtle: drawing the Plaid Shirt..
Posted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 6:53 am
by Niko123000
Posted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 11:22 am
by Chris
LOL WTF! Awesome strip!!
that second panel looks like missing one frame o_O and is that a dog or a mouse?
still awesome strip
its better than mine >_> *feels jealous*
edit: I poked your strip *a little* Now the size is like O&M size
Posted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 4:10 pm
by Niko123000
Now I feel Jeleous. You actually got the speech Bubbles to look decent.
And BTW, the guy in the plaid Shirt is a hamster, while the guy who is in shock is... I think a Golden Retriver...
Posted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 4:16 pm
by Dr. Doog
you don't...understand...it's not newspaper format...agh.
good strip, Niko! I laughed
Posted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 5:14 pm
by Muninn
Nice strip, I don't know the comic so I'll have to rely on what you drew here for how their personalities are.
And what's wrong with not drawing in newspaper-style format?
Posted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 5:25 pm
by Niko123000
Actually I dont quite think I got the personalitiees right. Doug I think (hes the Dog) I got smewhat right, but I think I got Bob wrong.
Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 5:38 am
by Tabris_The_17th
Not bad! I don't know the comic or the story this pretains to, so it's a tad lost on me, but it seems pretty good. "I'm trying to get used to seeing boobs" is a great line, LOL.
Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 2:06 pm
by Foxhound
kinda weird, but it made me laugh. good job.
Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 3:02 pm
by osprey
Nice strip, I had a laugh. I'd probably find it even funnier if I knew the strip.
