Segovia's Art Work (w/ General Discussion ) Thread

[Segovia]

It's not all that funny, to be honest.

Now if you included something about plantsonas, then you might have something >_>

Well Thank you for being honest. I don't what to say is that maybe it's not as funny because it doesn't have a picture. Right now it's monotoned and now I have to give it some voice. But still I appreciate you being honest.

One other thing I like to say is that my jokes are long. I like adding a whole lot of detail. But I am limited to only a four panel strip so of course I have to sacrifice some things including detail. I am thinking on changing the style when needed. You all know about VG cats style of format? Well I was thinking that if one comic needs more room dialouge I could use that kind of style. Hopefully this will cut down on detail.

[Segovia]

Here's another one that I hope is funnier.

Lora: So then what happened?

Reggie: So me and Bruno were walking in the park, see? Then all of a sudden this really creepy dude pops out of nowhere, grabs me and and I tell the guy recked of week old cheese, right?

Reggie: Anyway then he screams on the top of his lungs and orders me to-

(Raido: Every breath you take.)

(Radio: Every move you make)

(Radio: Every bond you break, every step you take, I'll be watching you.)

Reggie: Hey Lora?
Lora: Yeah?

Reggie: I think that song's about stalkers.

[Dr. Sticks]

mmm... not funny. The other day greg dean of reallifecomics.com did a strip where he was complaining about another police song... and really it just showed "hey I'm not going to actually know anything about this song, but I'm going to make dumb judgments about it".

so, that joke has been done in the past month, and it wasn't funny that time either. imagine if I was making jokes about how dumb metallica songs were

[Segovia]

Well then it seems that I am screwed. Better brush up on material. Might as well climb Mt Everest while I'm at it.

[Dr. Sticks]

(oh, and by the way the reference to Nabokov in Don't Stand So Close to Me isn't obscure at all, the song is about sting being a pedophile.)

[Segovia]

I guess that I'll just give up on trying to make super complex jokes and just try to settle with what comes across me in life. Come to think of it my life is pretty amusing. Might as well put it in strip form.

However that means that I'll only have three years of material since I'll be the first to go off to college then I'll be stricken from my muses. Meh, I guess I'll only need to do it for three years. Maybe in college I'll do another comic for fun.

[Dr. Sticks]

I'm not sure why going to college would == not having hilarious misadventures

[Segovia]

Because my comic is about brotherhood and all that life affects it. Without my brothers I don't know what to write about. Maybe in college I'll start a comic about some other character and that one will be about college life.

[Segovia]

Actually that idea sounds pretty fun. Although I bet it isn't original but I could make it unique with my own personality. I could see it now....

[Dr. Sticks]

you could set it in some random podunk and call it "Podunk U"

[Segovia]

Yeah and I could call him umm.... Oh I know Gregory! And he'll be pessimestic time manager in a busy go world that is college. He'll be the Christian openmineded Wetblanket but will be sensible to his peers! It's a gold mind!

Maybe I can get on a more personal level with this guy than Roger or Reggie!

( Get it? Gregory? Pope Gregory the Great? Gregorian Calendar? Pessimestic time manager? Eh, probably too advance for ya.)

Anyway I guess that's something too brew in the mind for a couple of years.

[MaxFox]

uhh don't you mean advanced??

[Segovia]

Maybe but you get what I mean.

[Dr. Sticks]

Gregory the Great was not the pope that helped formulate the Gregorian calendar. I spent three days researching this last week.

[Segovia]

Whatever. It still sounds like a good characterization. I can't wait to get started on that but right now focusing on Minerva Bros. Right now I am working on a Mega comic that I probably won't finish today but I'll post it ASAP.