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Postby Segovia » Sat Dec 06, 2008 10:16 pm

I didn't get the name from Ms. Mudd. I got the name from the book I'm reading called mythology. And besides I don't think that people make connections to comics through names. I have no intintions on changing the name.
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Postby Dr. Sticks » Sat Dec 06, 2008 11:13 pm

Minerva is a dumb name for Ms. Mudd to have. He should have never given her one.
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Postby Segovia » Sun Dec 07, 2008 1:00 am

Ok. Here is another sample comic including Reggie's older brother Roger.

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Roger can be a jerk to Reggie sometimes. But most of the time the get along with each other. He only gets this way when he is really angry.

To be honest, Reggie's final line came from my friend Nestor. He used to say this all the time when I talked to him sarcastically. So Nestor if your reading this, which I'm 100% sure you're not, Thank you.
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Postby Segovia » Sun Dec 07, 2008 2:39 pm

I have a confession to make. Roger is me.
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Postby Tom Flapwell » Sun Dec 07, 2008 5:45 pm

Someone drench the towel and whip it at Roger.
Roger is me.
Brings to mind a Michael Moore title....
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Postby nickspoon » Sun Dec 07, 2008 5:51 pm

The final bubble, "Or else why would I say it?" sounds syntactically awkward. Perhaps better would be "Why would I use it, otherwise?" or "Why else would I use it?" (Verb changed because one does not say sarcasm, one uses sarcasm and says sarcastic things.)
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Postby Segovia » Sun Dec 07, 2008 11:13 pm

I know that the last line did sound wierd but I didn't know how to improve it. Sorry you guys had to see the bad side of Roger first. Trust me he is a good guy, he just gets a little fustrated at times.
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Postby osprey » Mon Dec 08, 2008 2:53 am

"Why else would I say it?"

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OK. pants it. I lied. It's drum and bass. What you gonna do?
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Postby Arloest » Mon Dec 08, 2008 3:19 am

"Why else would I use it?"

Further improved.
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Postby FerretParade » Mon Dec 08, 2008 4:04 am

"Fritz likes lucario dongs." Even more so improved
so there's a high school football coach sittin on the couch,
with a toothpick in his mouth.
and the stray dog won't forget the day,
he tricked him with a chocolate shake. (little trick)
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Postby datherman » Mon Dec 08, 2008 4:05 am

"Fritz likes lucario dongs." Even more so improved
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Postby MuffinSticks » Mon Dec 08, 2008 4:39 am

"Fritz loves lucario dongs." Even more so improved
КТО ТРОГАЛ МОЯ ПУШКА

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Postby Tarukai » Mon Dec 08, 2008 6:38 am

Personally I like the flow of "Or else would I use it?"

I believe this is grammatically and syntactically correct, in that it's continuing the previous state ment in a way.
[00:34:00] <Dermy> I do love to manipulate the standard rules of language for opportunistic effect
[00:34:06] <Dermy> Like a grammar hyena, I am
[00:34:16] <Dermy> Munching on the tasty entrails of tradition

[22:26:20] <MuffinSticks> I'm a chocolate muffin with white ears and a striped black and red tail
[22:26:35] <MuffinSticks> And exactly 6 chips

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Postby osprey » Mon Dec 08, 2008 8:25 am

"Fritz likes lucario dongs." Even more so improved
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OK. pants it. I lied. It's drum and bass. What you gonna do?
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Postby Segovia » Mon Dec 08, 2008 1:26 pm

I glad that my grammatical errors could be of some what amusing to you all. All though the Fritz comment was a bit vulgar and uneeded. Anyway see if you can find any in this comic.

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You are all so predictable. you all will probably say that Reggie on drugs or some nonsense simular to that.
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