My first attempt at drawing...well sorta

[Tabris_The_17th]

You're off to a nice start PAK! That last picture is cool. Aside from what people have mentioned, I'd also work on that table. The left leg kind of just disapears. Considering the angle it's going down, it seems like it should be visible lower in the picture and not covered by his legs.K

[Chris]

Is it me or that fox have a REALLY pointy head with no ears?? :-Po

[VenM2]

Oh no! Revenge of the angry Coneheads! Omg I used to love that movie when I was a kid.:

[Tom Flapwell]

I've found full-length mirrors to be quite helpful in drawing body positions. Unfortunately, my current residence doesn't have a good place for one, so my art may suffer in the near future.

[PAK]

right...ive tried to fix a few problems...



so...have i actually made it better or worse? :PR

[PAK]

ok just decided to change the head a bit...cos i actualy made it worse :S



plz tell me if its better than the first one...

[Tom Flapwell]

Better ears, check. Better nose, check. Better eye, YMMV but I say check. His legs are still out of perspective, unless the table is missing a leg.

[PAK]

Better ears, check. Better nose, check. Better eye, YMMV but I say check. His legs are still out of perspective, unless the table is missing a leg.

wats YMMV? and good to know that ive improved

as for the table leg, ive only included the table + chair as background 'props', so i dont really pay attention to them...but its true, the table leg should pass between the viewer and the leg further from us...S

[PAK]

Wouldn't the fox legs both be between the two table legs on that side, in which case we should see a table leg in front of all other legs? Eh, it depends how you sit.

YMMV stands for "Your Mileage May Vary." In other words, some people are likely to have a different opinion.

whoops...you're right. the table leg should obsure everything...

lets pretend for now that its an occasional-leg table :Pp

[Priest_Revan]

right...ive tried to fix a few problems...



so...have i actually made it better or worse?

Better. You can see the diff. between he head and his second ear. His legs are still a bit off from the norm. and closest ear is still connected to his forehead. Not pretty.

His torso is a bit... big (unless he is supposed to be a bit big). He shoulder seems to be in the wrong spot (too far forward).

The only other thing I'm noticing is the strange placement of the table leg.,

[PAK]

priestrevan thats not the latest one that ive done...ive improved the one that u just quoted... #

[Tom Flapwell]

lets pretend for now that its an occasional-leg table

Good comeback.

[Priest_Revan]

priestrevan thats not the latest one that ive done...ive improved the one that u just quoted...

I know, and I knew that when I used this one.

I chose this one because it was better.

[PAK]

priestrevan thats not the latest one that ive done...ive improved the one that u just quoted...

I know, and I knew that when I used this one.

I chose this one because it was better.

why is this one better than my latest? this one has a really strange face...+

[Priest_Revan]

priestrevan thats not the latest one that ive done...ive improved the one that u just quoted...

I know, and I knew that when I used this one.

I chose this one because it was better.

why is this one better than my latest? this one has a really strange face...

Strange face, better perspective.