Defining 'artwork'

[The Donmeister]

Seriously though, thanks for the explanation. I always appreciate a bit of help with poetry. So do you have any plans for any more work in the near future?

[_SeHT]

Seriously though, thanks for the explanation. I always appreciate a bit of help with poetry. So do you have any plans for any more work in the near future?

You enjoyed it, then?

I might post some more in a day or two. See what I can find.

[The Donmeister]

You enjoyed it, then?

Yeah, it was pretty good. I'm not really a poetry fan, but that was an enjoyable read.

[Ibun]

Eh. It was okay; but it's a little cliche in my opinion.

A little advance notice: don't expect to get a rise out of me.

Everyone is entitled to their opinion. But opinions don't mean much without reasons.

Or you could always do something yourself that is, subjectively to you, 'better'.

Just don't expect to start a flame-war with this dragon.

Somebody is a little defensive. Jeez.

[_SeHT]

Ahhh. Here is another one.

• LUKE 2:19
  
  It was the first time we’d ever met, you and I,
  • and you picked me out from a crowd without thinking
  Took me home
  • gave me good red wine
    • and laughed at circumstance when I fell over,
      tired and insensible.
  We took each other to bed then
  • via the shower
    • and I shan’t remember the rest
  Not here, not now.
  
  How can you trap the wind in your hair
  • or the rain on your face
    • actinic the lightning blurring the sky
  Everybody wanted to know what it was like
  • how it went
    
    which was fine and kind
    
    but how am I supposed to express
    a joy too deep for believing
    
    • an emotion too deep for knowing
      
      • a peace too complete for explaining
        
        • a love that
          
          • that
    how --- where --- do I begin?
  my jaw opened like a gaffed fish, gaping,
  
  my pen slides across the page and leaves a trail of ink
  
  • that means nothing
    
    • nothing
  If silence does not tell you how I felt
  • then you could not understand anyhow;
    
    • if it does then I do not need to speak
  But I would not speak:
  • for those secrets are our secrets
    
    mine and his
  And I finally understood
  • what Mary kept to herself
    
    • and why it was she kept it
      
      • and never
        
        • let it
          
          • go.

[Tum0spoo]

Yeah... I can't say much more. Just, please continue to write. it's very good.

[Comrade K]

It's hard to comment on poetry. So, it's good.