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Posted: **Wed Jul 19, 2006 9:05 pm**

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Posted: **Wed Jul 19, 2006 9:14 pm**

Stephan's line...

add somehting like: You'd have to be a +1 mage with <insert D&D ramblings>!

Posted: **Wed Jul 19, 2006 9:17 pm**

Stephan's line...

add somehting like: You'd have to be a +1 mage with <insert>!

That kills the joke.

The humor lies within suggesting Millie is not of her right mind.

Posted: **Wed Jul 19, 2006 9:21 pm**

Stephan's line...

add somehting like: You'd have to be a +1 mage with <insert>!
That kills the joke.

The humor lies within suggesting Millie is not of her right mind.

Pehaps split it?
something like...
[Stephen flames or somehting in glasses]You'd have to be...<D&D ramblings>

[Avery ignoring him]Yeah, you'd have to be totally nuts to...

[enter millie]

Posted: **Wed Jul 19, 2006 9:25 pm**

Stephan's line...

add somehting like: You'd have to be a +1 mage with <insert>!
That kills the joke.

The humor lies within suggesting Millie is not of her right mind.
Pehaps split it?
something like...
[Stephen flames or somehting in glasses]You'd have to be...<D>

[Avery ignoring him]Yeah, you'd have to be totally nuts to...

[enter millie]

I've already put in two Leonard Nimoy related allusions. I don't want to OVERDO it.

Posted: **Wed Jul 19, 2006 9:28 pm**

I've already put in two Leonard Nimoy related allusions. I don't want to OVERDO it.

*chops down quote tree*

Stephen is all about overdoing it!
I say milk it for all it's got. This isn't going to be just the O&M community seeing this. You have to give others the ability to really get the characters. once their personalities are established you can be more subtle.

Posted: **Wed Jul 19, 2006 10:56 pm**

(Gets and idea) is that a thought becuase you wont be able to see a thought ok.

i like hte first part better now but do you plan on having ozy and llewellyn in this one again

Posted: **Wed Jul 19, 2006 11:15 pm**

(Gets and idea) is that a thought becuase you wont be able to see a thought ok.

No, that's not a thought. It's an "acting direction" like you suggested I include, to help the actor figure out how it should be read.

i like hte first part better now but do you plan on having ozy and llewellyn in this one again

It would be a fine "Ozy and Millie" script if it didn't at least have Ozy in, now wouldn't it?

Posted: **Wed Jul 19, 2006 11:44 pm**

ok ok

you did better this time i like it. keep up the good work

Posted: **Sat Jul 22, 2006 1:11 am**

Ba da da dum I'm likin' it.

Posted: **Sat Jul 29, 2006 11:09 am**

It's good, but on screen that'd only be about a minutes worth of footage.

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