Good poetry is never "flowery". It siezes you by the heart, leaving you short of breath and appreciative of the human capacity for beauty and life.something meaningful and flowery like that.
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This is true. There is simply too much poetry that misses that completely in its attempt to use the fanciest language and the cleverest techniques. I'm not really one for epic poetry, either; I prefer short and powerful.Good poetry is never "flowery". It siezes you by the heart, leaving you short of breath and appreciative of the human capacity for beauty and life.
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What makes a poem fake? I don't normally read poetry unless it's included in something else I'm already readingand yet rather than continue the topic at hand, you write a fake poem. it could have at least been about the evolution of the thread, cross-examined against the futility of life. something meaningful and flowery like that.
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the fakeness was that he was actually just rewording a Weird Al song, or at least that's what I got from the four or five posts before mine.
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Well put doog. You never posted anything offensive whatsoever
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I really don't know why people make such big deals out of everything
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Well put doog. You never posted anything offensive whatsoever
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Well put doog. You never posted anything offensive whatsoever
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Pointing out the obvious doesn't make you cool. You made a *Sticks account because two other people had. Me and Bacon made it up, which makes us more original and cooler than you.people like STICKS
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