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Pehaps split it?That kills the joke.Stephan's line...
add somehting like: You'd have to be a +1 mage with <insert>!
The humor lies within suggesting Millie is not of her right mind.
something like...
[Stephen flames or somehting in glasses]You'd have to be...<D&D ramblings>
[Avery ignoring him]Yeah, you'd have to be totally nuts to...
[enter millie]
I've already put in two Leonard Nimoy related allusions. I don't want to OVERDO it.Pehaps split it?That kills the joke.Stephan's line...
add somehting like: You'd have to be a +1 mage with <insert>!
The humor lies within suggesting Millie is not of her right mind.
something like...
[Stephen flames or somehting in glasses]You'd have to be...<D>
[Avery ignoring him]Yeah, you'd have to be totally nuts to...
[enter millie]
*chops down quote tree*I've already put in two Leonard Nimoy related allusions. I don't want to OVERDO it.
Stephen is all about overdoing it!
I say milk it for all it's got. This isn't going to be just the O&M community seeing this. You have to give others the ability to really get the characters. once their personalities are established you can be more subtle.
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(Gets and idea) is that a thought becuase you wont be able to see a thought ok.
i like hte first part better now but do you plan on having ozy and llewellyn in this one again
i like hte first part better now but do you plan on having ozy and llewellyn in this one again
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No, that's not a thought. It's an "acting direction" like you suggested I include, to help the actor figure out how it should be read.(Gets and idea) is that a thought becuase you wont be able to see a thought ok.
It would be a fine "Ozy and Millie" script if it didn't at least have Ozy in, now wouldn't it?i like hte first part better now but do you plan on having ozy and llewellyn in this one again
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ok ok
you did better this time i like it. keep up the good work
you did better this time i like it. keep up the good work
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