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October 17, 2009

Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 6:35 am
by Hyperion
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Aaaaaand, time jump back to the past. :huh: If it had been this instead of the political blah last time, might actually start almost liking it. As is... Eh.

Re: October 17, 2009

Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 6:39 am
by MuffinSticks
Human bitch, to this, to eating vegetarian dog snacks and drinking lattes.

Re: October 17, 2009

Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 7:16 am
by Gecko
RD makes me cry tears of why-the-hell-does-every-line-of-dialog-feel-so-awkward. Descriptive tears are descriptive.

Re: October 17, 2009

Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 8:02 am
by Cactus Jack
This could have been powerful if it wasn't following an obviouse political strip about how vegetariousm and transexualism is totally unatural and therefore awesome.

Re: October 17, 2009

Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 9:12 am
by Kuro
When is someone going to tell Simpson that Three pages is not an update? and NOT ALL DOGS ARE WOLVES GEEZUS! One of the dogs was a pantsless BULLDOG, They are NOT a pack of wolves they are just a pack of dogs..What the hell?!

Re: October 17, 2009

Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 9:34 am
by datherman
When is someone going to tell Simpson that Three pages is not an update?
3 pages a week is better than 1 a week.

Re: October 17, 2009

Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 9:45 am
by GatMcNapalm
What is she struggling with in the last pannels, thats realy bad when a comic book character is being a bad actor.

Re: October 17, 2009

Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 10:12 am
by Kuro
What is she struggling with in the last pannels, thats realy bad when a comic book character is being a bad actor.

She looks constipated to me...

Re: October 17, 2009

Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 10:34 am
by Mattes
story going on: she kills says o noes i killed and eat meat i have to vanish and then she end in the city and learn why vegans are the best people so become one and try to take over the world......it fails badly. After that there are time jumps to the future and back before Raine Dog was born to prove.........TIMEJUMPS DOESNT HAVE TO BE EXPLAINED THEY ARE AWESUMMMEE SO SHUT UP YOU DAMN PEOPLE. AND BY THE WAY BUY STUFF FROM DCS BECAUSE OTHERWISE DCS HAS TO TAKE A REAL JOB FOR MONEY AND THAT MEANS LESS TIME TO DRAW TIMEJUMP STRIPS.


Sorry I couldnĀ“t stop myself

P.s DCS really looks just like a guy with lipstick^^

Re: October 17, 2009

Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 1:41 pm
by D-puff
This could have been powerful if it wasn't following an obviouse political strip about how vegetariousm and transexualism is totally unatural and therefore awesome.
Agreed.

I might have even gone to the extent of calling it somewhat 'badass' if we didn't already know how it was going to end. Then again, it would be just as disappointing if we were pumped to see some batshit dog ripping people apart to have a comic one day after all is said and done that just said 'Hey guys, I'm a vegetarian!'. And I feel like her change to a vegetarian would have actually seemed a little more meaningful if she waited, like after some scene where she rips a person limb from limb she just can't handle the pressure of it all, or something a little more epic like that, rather than already knowing she was going to puss out eventually. Nevertheless, at least she would actually have some people a little more excited about the comic until she decided to drop the bomb on it.
And that's why chronological order is a good thing, give or take the use of time travel.

Re: October 17, 2009

Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 2:58 pm
by NonsenseWords
Doesn't necessarily even need to be pure chronological order. Knowing what happens to the character and then flashing back to show why can be a very powerful device. Just that this presentation kind of ruined it; none of us have any reason to really care what happens to Raine Dog in the present, since every one of her 'present day' strips is basically her bitching about politics and delivering messages and just shut up nobody cares.

On the plus side, this did only take a week to come out, which is a sight better than waiting a month for four pages.

Re: October 17, 2009

Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 3:56 pm
by Google [Bot ]
people need to shut up about the "time jumps", because they're still in chronological order, and you're retarded if you can't understand them. there are two timelines going on: one is the right-now-present-day, and the other is the chronological backstory of Raine Dog, and the only jumping around going on, is in between episodes of RD's past, to the present day where she is "narrating".


but as for this strip, I feel like Alpha could have actually had intellectual discussions with Raine in order to make her understand why she should stop obeying people... I mean, she already did kind of stop obeying them. It's not like she's a robot, and he's saying things that are secretly commands designed to reverse her coding...


"remember the harm humans have done to you" ... but Alpha doesn't really know any of the harm. "you will no longer submit to the pampered primates... you will submit to your alpha."

he really doesn't have a lot of charisma, a cult leader would be 30x better at convincing Raine to become feral than Alpha is.

Re: October 17, 2009

Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 4:24 pm
by Cactus Jack
When is someone going to tell Simpson that Three pages is not an update? and NOT ALL DOGS ARE WOLVES GEEZUS! One of the dogs was a pantsless BULLDOG, They are NOT a pack of wolves they are just a pack of dogs..What the hell?!

I think thats the point. They are normal dogs rebelling against society by becoming transgender and asking for money so they don't have to work day jobs.

Re: October 17, 2009

Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 4:49 pm
by Liz
I'd pantsless obey some guy who can make his eyes vanish upon will.

Re: October 17, 2009

Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 5:00 pm
by Maggot Brain
Raine Dog: somehow making me grateful that dogs don't talk.