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Postby Foxchild » Mon Apr 12, 2004 2:31 pm

This is a comic i drew for another LJ user called mandoandy. the two chars don't yet have names, but they are brothers.
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Postby Muninn » Mon Apr 12, 2004 3:20 pm

Llewellyn picture.<br>Upside down signature.<br>Millie and Avery.<br>Nice touches.<br><br>Nice art, you're probably the best here, plus the chair is very similar to mine. Now the constructive criticism; the cupboards are crooked, a ruler would help. The third panel split would be better as just a straight line or a zig zag all the way. Seperate panels, it looks much better that way. You mispelled <i>supplies</i>.
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Postby Foxchild » Mon Apr 12, 2004 3:25 pm

woohoo mispellings! and yes, normally i do separate the panels, and use a ruler. take a look at the redone one of mine involving the 5 litres or gallons, depending upon version, of cherry kool-aid. critisisms taken with gratitude. thanks.
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Postby Dr. Dos » Mon Apr 12, 2004 3:31 pm

Very nice indeed.
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Postby Tavis » Mon Apr 12, 2004 6:17 pm

hehe Nice.. oh, and you also misspelled <i>generous</i>. And I think artist signatures look nicer when they're done by hand.. it gives it the personal touch a font lacks.<br><br>All in all, a great comic with lots of potental.
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Postby Foxchild » Mon Apr 12, 2004 6:21 pm

yeah, but 2 things. 1) i forgot the signiture by hand, and 2) my handwriting sucked on it anyway, hence the computer font. I prefere by hand, but this time i was too sloppy to let it pass. An i'm going to go in and clear up the misspellings in a little bit, once i'm home. thanks for pointing those out.
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Postby norsenerd » Mon Apr 12, 2004 10:18 pm

Good work.<br><br>*aplouds*
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Postby penguinita » Tue Apr 13, 2004 1:26 am

i'll disagree w/ javcob on this one-- i like the way the 3rd pannel is split
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Postby Arloest » Tue Apr 13, 2004 2:22 am

Good job! Very professional, with the exception of a couple mispellings here and there, but we all make 'em.
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Postby Zaaphod » Tue Apr 13, 2004 3:03 am

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Postby norsenerd » Tue Apr 13, 2004 4:14 am

Peopel who don't spell perficly are inhearntly stupid.
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Postby Sabre » Tue Apr 13, 2004 5:22 am

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Postby Zylo » Tue Apr 13, 2004 5:28 am

Coffee. Pixy-stix. All the makings of a great strip.<br><br>Me likes a lot.
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Postby Burning Sheep Productions » Tue Apr 13, 2004 12:48 pm

My critisism, WHAT HAPPENED TO THE FANGS!!?<br>Fangless dogs; what is the world comming to?
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Postby Muninn » Tue Apr 13, 2004 4:30 pm

<i>Penguinita wrote<br>i'll disagree w/ javcob on this one</i><br><br>It's Tavis' name you're supposed to spell wrong.
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