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Llewellyn picture.<br>Upside down signature.<br>Millie and Avery.<br>Nice touches.<br><br>Nice art, you're probably the best here, plus the chair is very similar to mine. Now the constructive criticism; the cupboards are crooked, a ruler would help. The third panel split would be better as just a straight line or a zig zag all the way. Seperate panels, it looks much better that way. You mispelled <i>supplies</i>.
woohoo mispellings! and yes, normally i do separate the panels, and use a ruler. take a look at the redone one of mine involving the 5 litres or gallons, depending upon version, of cherry kool-aid. critisisms taken with gratitude. thanks.
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yeah, but 2 things. 1) i forgot the signiture by hand, and 2) my handwriting sucked on it anyway, hence the computer font. I prefere by hand, but this time i was too sloppy to let it pass. An i'm going to go in and clear up the misspellings in a little bit, once i'm home. thanks for pointing those out.
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i'll disagree w/ javcob on this one-- i like the way the 3rd pannel is split
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Good job! Very professional, with the exception of a couple mispellings here and there, but we all make 'em.
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