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CptRaccoon
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Postby CptRaccoon » Mon Jun 16, 2008 6:35 pm

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Here's ma latest.

New New New.
Forgive me my ERRORS.
I'm a german dork.
Wich want to be an american guy.
Pleas, Pleas, Pleas forgive me.

I want to know what u think about my comic i drawing in the past?
I've got draw 5 strips and 3 are alredy online and I want to say it was writing in the puparty phase who you like to have a girl, wich started last year and end this year in the week I got my E-Guitar (funy?). I say that bevause I won't that u think I'm an psycho or something. It is full of fellings I have at this time!
http://cptraccoon.cp.funpic.de/Shit%20H ... 00001.html
And please give me a feedback!

I love millie she is the sweetest girl of the world

Neil Armstrang said when he landed on the moon:
"that's one more slice of Lasagna"

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Postby Baconsticks » Mon Jun 16, 2008 6:55 pm

Nice use of the American flag there. It makes the text hard to read.
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Postby VolkswagenFox » Mon Jun 16, 2008 7:42 pm

The American flag is interesting, though It does make the text less readable. Maybe if it where a little lighter it would be better. Good job on the colouring though.

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Postby osprey » Mon Jun 16, 2008 7:53 pm

Looks good, however, I think if you made the text over the American flag white, it would be a lot easier to read.
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Postby CptRaccoon » Mon Jun 16, 2008 8:15 pm

Looks good, however, I think if you made the text over the American flag white, it would be a lot easier to read.
If I had do this U can realy not read the Text.
Remeber One of the COlors of the flag of the unitec states of america is WIthe. WIth Text of the with strips of the Flag? I realy don't know How to read this.

I think I hadn't should make so many "contrast".

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Forgive me my ERRORS.
I'm a german dork.
Wich want to be an american guy.
Pleas, Pleas, Pleas forgive me.

I want to know what u think about my comic i drawing in the past?
I've got draw 5 strips and 3 are alredy online and I want to say it was writing in the puparty phase who you like to have a girl, wich started last year and end this year in the week I got my E-Guitar (funy?). I say that bevause I won't that u think I'm an psycho or something. It is full of fellings I have at this time!
http://cptraccoon.cp.funpic.de/Shit%20H ... 00001.html
And please give me a feedback!

I love millie she is the sweetest girl of the world

Neil Armstrang said when he landed on the moon:
"that's one more slice of Lasagna"

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Postby osprey » Mon Jun 16, 2008 10:29 pm

I was thinking more white with a 1px black border. Sorry, forgot to mention that part.
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Postby CptRaccoon » Tue Jun 17, 2008 1:57 pm

I was thinking more white with a 1px black border. Sorry, forgot to mention that part.
Can u say me how I can do this by gimp. I think I most more lerning to do this. But it is a good Idea.
Forgive me my ERRORS.
I'm a german dork.
Wich want to be an american guy.
Pleas, Pleas, Pleas forgive me.

I want to know what u think about my comic i drawing in the past?
I've got draw 5 strips and 3 are alredy online and I want to say it was writing in the puparty phase who you like to have a girl, wich started last year and end this year in the week I got my E-Guitar (funy?). I say that bevause I won't that u think I'm an psycho or something. It is full of fellings I have at this time!
http://cptraccoon.cp.funpic.de/Shit%20H ... 00001.html
And please give me a feedback!

I love millie she is the sweetest girl of the world

Neil Armstrang said when he landed on the moon:
"that's one more slice of Lasagna"

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Postby osprey » Wed Jun 18, 2008 12:43 am

I was thinking more white with a 1px black border. Sorry, forgot to mention that part.
Can u say me how I can do this by gimp. I think I most more lerning to do this. But it is a good Idea.
I don't know, I use Photoshop.
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Postby Sage » Wed Jun 18, 2008 1:00 am

Your coloring is good and all, but try to cut down on coloring the text boxes so much. If you do color them make it a little more subtle, like using bright or desaturated colors.
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Postby CptRaccoon » Tue Aug 19, 2008 4:32 pm

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The Latest Coler strip, by me.

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A very Funy Picture.

ANd here is a update list of millies Hair by the funy coloring.
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Forgive me my ERRORS.
I'm a german dork.
Wich want to be an american guy.
Pleas, Pleas, Pleas forgive me.

I want to know what u think about my comic i drawing in the past?
I've got draw 5 strips and 3 are alredy online and I want to say it was writing in the puparty phase who you like to have a girl, wich started last year and end this year in the week I got my E-Guitar (funy?). I say that bevause I won't that u think I'm an psycho or something. It is full of fellings I have at this time!
http://cptraccoon.cp.funpic.de/Shit%20H ... 00001.html
And please give me a feedback!

I love millie she is the sweetest girl of the world

Neil Armstrang said when he landed on the moon:
"that's one more slice of Lasagna"

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Postby CptRaccoon » Fri Aug 22, 2008 11:37 am

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My Latest funny Picture.
Forgive me my ERRORS.
I'm a german dork.
Wich want to be an american guy.
Pleas, Pleas, Pleas forgive me.

I want to know what u think about my comic i drawing in the past?
I've got draw 5 strips and 3 are alredy online and I want to say it was writing in the puparty phase who you like to have a girl, wich started last year and end this year in the week I got my E-Guitar (funy?). I say that bevause I won't that u think I'm an psycho or something. It is full of fellings I have at this time!
http://cptraccoon.cp.funpic.de/Shit%20H ... 00001.html
And please give me a feedback!

I love millie she is the sweetest girl of the world

Neil Armstrang said when he landed on the moon:
"that's one more slice of Lasagna"


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